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This new rendition was made in Procreate. I used the Monoline brush to give it a crisp outline but I'm unsure if that takes away from the horror element. I got some peer feedback that the eye is "too anime" so I'll do some variations to make it look less cute.
I also very quickly placed the spot on a crude mockup of a book page just to see if the scale the drawing is at effects the legibility. I think some of the spotty texture is getting lost and some of the white separating lines are too thin. I do however think the balance of black and white is quite good, the spot feels contemporary and visually interesting and I think it reflects my style more. |
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I noticed the cloud element looked strange and disjointed by not connecting on the edge. I copied the original cloud layer (above) so i could trace the shape round. I will also be changing the colours to match the ones on the cover. I also don't like the stacked type on the spine. It just looks like it wasn't done right. I'll try making it more straight in the next edits.
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